All Comments on 'The Bridge Over Wilson's Creek'

That was a very evocative story! I Love your style.

A beautiful story.

You caught the aura of the times and the emotions of the characters so very well.

And that neither of the characters was perfect, physically, gave the story an extra realistic feel.

Very well done.

I love the way you write erotica and not porn! Keep up the good work as I look forward to reading more of your stories.

and I love you for dreaming it and sharing your dream with me. Your friend, Dave

you almost forget you are reading erotica. can't wait to read more of your work

Dexx

The characters were more believable, warmer, and offered interesting dialogue. I thought the story line to be a bit predictable, and the end itself was a bit dry. But overall, this is one of your very best efforts, it's so unfortunate an "E" was not earned here!

Dear Penny,

Wonderful as always. Real characters, real reactions, real emotions. You are one of my very favorite authors and never disappoint.

Patti

This is an amazing story, it doesnt even feel like an erotic novel more like a book that you never want to put down. You have real talent and I look forward to reading more of your works.

A real treat to read. The dialect was well done - not intrusive or heavy-handed. The sex scenes were so naturally a part of the story that, as soneone else remarked, it didn't seem like erotica so much as a wonderful story (odd that those two should seem mutually exclusive!)

Wow. That was truly one of the best stories I've read in quite some time. What beautiful imagery you've created with this one.

Penny,

Once again you have written a masterpiece. You have captured the characters perfectly. You completely enveloped the reader in the emotions, thoughts, and senses of the two main characters. I enjoy your stories, every one of them. They are so full of life. Thank you so very much.

Mike

It is so so refreshing to read a story about genuine love without the stylized rhetoric that can turn great writing into simply good porn. Penny, you have a talent that I can only hope to match, but never exceed.

Since the very first stoay I read, I have been mesmorized by the way you weave a story together.

No two stories are alike.

But even more than that you manage to develop real and interesting charachters in such a short while.

Always a fan.

john

Very sweet, emotional and well written story. Why do the best of times often leave us with the greatest regrets? Good story!

The tenderness in this story is almost overwhelming. Excellent imagery and realistic dialogue. Head and shoulders above most of the submittals on this site. Hope to read more of your work in the future.

Simply Beautiful

To put it bluntly I wanted to get my rocks off and ended up crying but that doesn't detreact from it being a wonderful story.

R.

A deeply moving, meaningful, and utterly sad story. Thank you for sharing.

What a marvellous and atmospheric story. You captured perfectly the sense of time and place to the extent that I could see every scene in my mind's eye. And the bonus was that you really can write, unlike so many on this site. As far as I could see, grammar and spelling were perfect which enhanced the pleasure I had in reading this tale. Thanks for that, Penelope.

I hope you still look at the comments occasionally, Penelope, because I'd like you to know that this rite-of-passage story, found by chance, rates among the best I've read on this site. Disregarding the lesbian love theme, it reminded me in some ways of the regional stories of the late Wisconsin writer August Derleth. I am so pleased that I stumbled across this. Thanks for the pleasure that the tale gave.

Brian

Lovely.

Great story, you told just enough to care about the 2 women. I like a comment from another reader about the fact the 2 women didn't look like top model. They were beautiful in the eyes of the other.

So many questions unanswered and with a little imagination we could think of many ways how Vicki's life was.

Did Vicki stay single 40 years?

Did she find happiness? With another woman or a man?

Did Vicki return home after college? Did she move elsewhere to let Beth and George live their live?

Did both of them talk about that summer years later?

Did George suspect something? When Vicki came visit the family, he could notice how both women look at each other. Sometime you can feel how some silence got more meaning than words.

Yes so many questions...

I’ve read so many stories on Literotica, but nothing compares to this one. Absolutely beautiful, I don’t know if I’ve ever gotten as wrapped up in characters in any story on this website, as the characters here. You wove a beautiful tale of emotion and longing, with the ability of a great storyteller. Just amazing

What a wonderful story. I wish they would have had a "happily ever after" ending, but I'm sure this was the realistic outcome of love like this in those days.

Well written and touching.

So so marvelous beautiful ..... My heart is taken , this tale is just pure romance pure love pure trust ....... You wrote this by your hearts&soul content and thank you for sharing this lightful tale

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It's heartbreaking when you consider how much so many must have have given up because of the era they were born in. It's easy to forget as someone who isnt part of the LGBTQ+ community just how much they've had to endure, and still have to endure in order to have something as as simple as love. Thank you, for reminding me, and for making my heart soar for their love, and break for the choices they had to make just to survive.