All Comments on 'That Special Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Beautiful

A very well written and thought out story. You could almost feel them falling in love and the pain of separating.

billc393billc393over 19 years ago
Wonderful!

What a wonderful story, tender yet sexy, warm and sensual... two people finding each other, finding pleasure in each other... wonderful! Very arousing while at the same time evoking emotions for both characters.

Great story!

-Bill

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 19 years ago
Very special summer.

Thanks for sharing this lovely tale. It is so warm and gentle. The time you take to set it up is time well spent. I'm a sucker for older women/younger guy stories and this is one of the best.

esl

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
you the man!!!

great story... nice and romantic, not too smutty

though that could be a good or bad thing

hope to see more similar stories

you da man

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I agree with the rest

It was a compelling wonderful tale with enough erotic detail to make one want to be in the bedroom, or in the mountains, or on the porch with a wonderful woman like you described. Beautiful!! Thanks for reminding me that life is about loving and living - not just balling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent!

You have written a great story...full of love and tenderness. I had that once and doubt that I will again. thanks and keep writing.

Ignatius J ReillyIgnatius J Reillyover 19 years ago
Could almost be called literature, not mere porn.

Fantastic writing ... paced just right, warm, tender and subtle. The way the characters are filled out, given proper context and motivation really makes a difference to the satisfaction felt when the inevitable climax is eventually reached. If the story is true, then you're students are priveliged. Thanks.

Thomas22JohnThomas22Johnover 19 years ago
My eyes are wet!

after this beautiful description of the young insecure boy and the older enchanting woman. So different from the run of the mill stories. The sexual tension can almost be touched. I would like to read more stories like this.

Well done - and thanks a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
special story

Damn good tale.

rdmrdmover 19 years ago
Excellent Work!!

Excellent example, in my opinion, of erotic writing. Not alot of graphic language which might have made it less enjoyable. One of the best submissions I have read on Literotica. More power to you and continued success.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sorry . . .

It may be a decent story, but I could not get past the terrible grammar and word usage. Minor mistakes generally do not bother me, but when the narrator and protagonist is portrayed as a writer and professor, I do expect better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
older woman for me too

my first woman was an older woman I worked with. I was 17 she was 46. We got together on Labor Day weekend when her husband, who had a girlfriend, was away with the kids and we did it for three years in a row. Plus we got together a few times in between. This story brought back many memories

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

This is an excellent story, compassionate, erotic and human. So much better than the f and s stories that are common here.

Jerry Sr.Jerry Sr.over 19 years ago
Loved it.

This is a great story. I loved how he matured sexually and physically that summer. I will say it again great story

wizarddriverwizarddriverover 19 years ago
Tale of a song

The story was a blend of songs, "Summer The First Time" by Bobby Goldsborough; and "That Summer" by Garth Brooks.

Superb story, really enjoyed it

Cheers,

Wizarddriver

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A beautiful love story

wonderful piece of story telling, can't add anymore to so many other beautiful comments; keep writing, I'm sure lots of us can't wait to read your next story! Hey, how about a 2nd chapter of the lady with her olderman lover preferably with more hotter sex scenes, ok?

Kay-DeeKay-Deeover 19 years ago
Wonderful!

A beautifully written story and something I can relate to as a 41 year old woman. Most enjoyable, thank you - Kay-Dee

mjanders1mjanders1over 19 years ago
Simply the best

This is simply the very best I have read here. It was erotic; it was touching. I was aroused; I cried. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sad to Be Woman in Her 40s

it's good for the young buck, to have the experience of an experienced woman in her 40s showing him the ropes; but it seems like it is hard to be a woman in her 40s, when men in their 40s only want young women who still can get pregnant and have a family --- likely a sceond or third brood for him and first for her.

the 40-something woman must content with very young men most of whom will not stay with them or stay with them long, because usually the young men would like to start a family, if not right away then a few years down the road; so that means the 40 something woman must pair up with much older men in their 50, 60s, or 70s, who must use Viagra,,, It is sad for "older women",,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A special summer indeed!!

I really enjoyed your story. It was a quick read and satisfying on so many levels. An erotic, sexy, funny, touching, coming of age story. I wish my first sexual encounter was like this. Thanks for a wonderful story!! You inspire me to share my own tales on this site.

odin56odin56almost 15 years ago
One of the best

Great story telling. Put a smile on my face and a twinlke in my eye.

kunnillinguistkunnillinguistover 13 years ago

beautiful story. Truly enjoyed it.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
great story

hot sex but nice coming-of-age story too- nicely written thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
it takes someone special

Special-Summer.....brought back some special memories for me. Sometimes it takes a special someone to learn to love again. Loved the stories, treasure the memories.

AABBL1718AABBL1718almost 8 years ago

Very compassionate, loving and story of maturity. Thank you for a good story.

Wolfgang1955Wolfgang1955over 4 years ago
5☆

Excellent story.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15almost 4 years ago
Beautiful!

Terrific coming of age story! Precious moments indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If life has battered the self esteem of a young man, nothing will repair it faster than learning that he has what it takes to appeal to, and please, a 40-something woman. Been there, done that. The six months that I spent with my Maggie half a lifetime ago is the foundation of everything good that followed. Wonderful, sweet story. 5 stars.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

What a sweet and tender story of love and trust. I thought the ending was about as good as it could realistically be. Too bad there isn't a Maggie in the lives of more young men. I've also got to add that it's not just sweet and tender, it's also very erotic as well. Got a rise out of this old man, lol.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

Great story, makes an old man think of his younger days.

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