All Comments on 'That Makes Two of Us!'

that I have read one of your stories, but it won't be the last! This was a very sensuous story.

After reading this once, I thought perhaps you could shorted it a bit. However, after the second rereading, I'm hooked. The sex might be a little too "proper" and "dainty" for some, but to me it's refreshing. This should easily be a strong contender for the contest!

Nice to see another story from you Alex. Not faultless perhaps, but I enjoyed it. None of this mindless fucking a total stranger, not too graphic either. Keep it up please.

It's been way to long since you posted a story. I do like your style, it's different from everyone else on this site, not strict formulistic, but it flows so well. This is another good one and I hope for many more.

That was incredilbe, erotic, but with an excellent story! Most stories here are all about fucking, but you built up a very good storyline. Please keep them comming ;-)

That was really great Summer Sex Story. All that conversation helped establish and set up a rapport which many other's don't have and need. I also liked the point of the protagonists' friends urgings and social interaction without interfering in Milly's and Charlie's sexual/sensual experience. Your description of, and verbal import in the experience was, to me, much more realistic; athletically led performance type sex had no place here. This story was really fun to read and even more fun to witness how a freer environment and more free minded (touched with common sense)experience can be, added caring and loving, experience can be. It is then 'human'. Now this is a sign of a 'real writer' doing and enjoying what he loves. I would, please, like to read more of your work. Thank you.

I love how the stories were posted a year apart.

THis was excellent, the characters were fully developed and built on the first story. Very hot too.

Very likeable characters, you have an easy style.

I was Blown Away by this and the one before it. I've read few other of your stories But this and the other our your best. Hope to see more stories of these four.

I was Blown Away by this and the one before it. I've read few other of your stories But this and the other our your best. Hope to see more stories of these four.

Such a fun, loving story of a first sexual romp. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

they take me back to yesteryears. My girlfriend's parents belonged to a tennis club with a nice lake. We opened the gate and locked it behind us; we made love in the water and on the pier; we returned to her home and made love in her basement/den. Other times we shared our love on the beaches, on the porches of homes temporarily empty, and in the water (which reminds me to ask why none of your nude beach stories have the folks getting it on in the water - it's so easy and fun). I don't mean to belittle your stories because they are all different and all fun, but many of them create such good memories that overwhelm me and add tremendously to the erotic reading, the fantasy story. Thanks and I look forward to 6 more years of your increasingly well written stories.

A very sensual and believable story. I enjoyed every minute of it. I'm looking forward to reading about the mom and dad at the nude beach with the kids and Candy eating Millie.

You are one very good author !

This needed another chapter to cover the period 'Later the same day...." but I guess after a gap of nearly 10 years that just isn't going to happen, which is a real shame.

Nevertheless, what have written here is great.

Thanks for another excellent story !