Tempted

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It's been a blissful three years as both brother and sister, husband and wife. We've finished school and are happy in our fields. We have just decided to go off birth control, so I can have a niece and a daughter or a nephew and a son in one fell swoop. Lord knows there'll be a baby made soon. Maybe even tonight.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice

I didn't like the anal gay crap or the pissing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice story 5 stars

I don't care for anal, I'm not gay...

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 5 years ago
Loved It!

It too bad they weren't real brother/sister thou.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fantasy Land???????????

. . . since I became a woman, at age 13.

No matter what any female claims, that is still a CHILD, a young child. Add at least another 10 to 12 years to become a young adult, IF sufficient maturity accompanies the additional age. Some, no, most females equate child bearing ability with becoming a woman? Heck, there are reports of little girls having babies as young as 7. Is this suppose to be a woman also?

SmallTitFanSmallTitFanabout 12 years ago
This is NOT bad

First, the gist of incest is having a sexual relationship with a family member with whom a person has previously had a relationship of trust or dependency. It is the potential abuse of the trust which, in part, leads to the taboo. I can assure you that, in most families, fucking your step-sister would be very verboten taboo. Secondly, the category is incest/taboo, not just incest. I thought the writing was very, very good and I tend to be very critical of other writers. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
This is not GOOD

I'm terribly sorry but you automatically lost my interest when you wrote down it was about the step family, in short this page where I found this story was in Incest/Taboo but in retrospect this story is not about Incest since they are only together through marriage. So you need to try again and put this in the right category next time so some readers are not disappointed!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Absolutely Speechless!

This story was simply incredible! You are now one of my favorite writers, without a doubt!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
WOW!

INCREDIBLE! Absolutely brilliant writing. Completely filthy and yet not in the typical, male-orientated porn way. A tender and loving story with all the right stuff in all the right places. And we all love a happy ending! lol! 11 out of 10!

jeff_davis18jeff_davis18almost 18 years ago
Incredible!

I have never enjoyed a story more than this one! It had all of the essential elements I look for in a good story. This work of art had substance, not just mindless sex, which made the hot moments in the story so much better for me. None of the parts in this story were over the top or sounded fake. It was perfect, in my opinion. Thank you for publishing this story and giving all of us readers the chance to enjoy your work!

Jeff

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Masterpiece

I have read a very many amount of stories on this site and i have never liked one enough to comment. But this story blew me away it was truely a masterpiece.

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