by zenmackie
You are so sexy. It reminds me of how vulnerable it used to feel having sex for the first time with someone you really liked. How difficult it was to even look at his cock. Feeling like a deer caught in the middle of the road, completely frozen, with this mix of shame and excitement. I remember feeling the heart beat so fast it could explode. You could drive a girl crazy. And I kinda hope you read this. And don't stop writing. Someone is reading and has loud orgasms thanks to your wicked mind.
Well written and read. Believable and immersive as it develops the story and we learn the lessons.
With every command I felt myself being pulled into the story, wishing, wanting so desperately to be Carol "Maria Santiago". I will share this with my Owner, hoping he too will treat me the same way.
Oh my... left me shivering a bit - like Carol... Love your voice. Hypnotic. Like velvet. Except when you get firm. I suppose it could sound like the crack of a whip, if needed, hm?
One thing only: The name was Jonathan, right? Not Andy, which is the last word in the story... ;)