All Comments on 'Teacher's Pet Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I liked it.

Actually, I guess I would give it an A- Tightly written, could move a bit faster. Nice twist including the male. Sure kept my interest.

SunnieSunnieover 18 years agoAuthor
Dammit

I didn't fucking proofread this enough. The italics aren't where they should be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
loved it

pls write more.. love these..

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A well told and interesting story

Having read all 8 extant parts of this story, I wanted to compliment you on your work, and encourage you to continue with your writing. Sex aside, this is an interesting and well told story with an engaging cast of characters who the audience is brought to genuinely care about. On top of this, your writing is actually good English, which the vast majority of erotica is not. I especially liked the use of "sophomoric"; one so rarely sees it used as an adjective, and it's such a good one.

Your work is a pleasure to read, and a good fit for this site, being both erotic and very literate.

I encourage you to keep up the good work. While I am not a publisher or critic or anything "qualified," your writing seems publishable to me. Getting published isn't an easy or quick task, but have faith in yourself. You are good, regardless of what anyone else tells you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Please Continue

This story is amazing...I started reading it and couldn't finish until I read all 8 parts. Please Continue to write this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More More More

I can't wait for the rest. Please tell me that this isn't the last chapter!

sexkitten214sexkitten214almost 17 years ago
more please!

i love this story please keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I'll buy it!

I loved all 8 chapters. If she finishes it and publishes it, I'd be the first one in line to buy her book.

KeosKeosover 15 years ago
Amazing!

Wow. This story is so intriguing, I couldn't stop reading it. Better storytelling than any other story I've ever read on here, better sex than the best romance novel. I agree with the other comments: Please finish!

Rad'lRad'lover 15 years ago
Well done and -

well written. A few very minor typos but all in all a good read. A novel twist just before the end; to my surprise I do hope the two lovers can put their lives back together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
<3

I absolutely loved it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
best thing I've read!!!!

please don't tell me that's the last chapter?! I'd love to see what happens with Sidney, and Ben and Grace's relationship.

I couldn't stop reading until I finished all 8 chapters!

This is the best thing I've read on here by far!

100/10 :D

Congratulations on such an amaazing story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You Have To Write More!!!!!

I Loved It! You Have To Write The Next Chapter, Don't Leave Us Hanging! We Need To know What Happens.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
holy shit

oh my god this story is awesome. five stars. more of this please!

DarkAngel26DarkAngel26almost 14 years ago
Awesome

Oh my god! Love this story i really hope you will continue this soon xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Is their going to be a chapter nine

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