All Comments on 'Swimming with the Dolphins'

kind of like a Summer Christmas of sorts, unusual to have a beach scene at that season. Good luck in the contest. (PS- I probably wouldn't have put the part in about the voting...may turn off some people)

I liked it, You kept the story believable and lite-hearted at the same time. Good work writer.

Well put together! A good read, nice tempo, great plot...

More, more... chuckle!

writing it but it was a surprise to see it today. Great job Jaime, like normal. Your writing is always such a welcome surprise.

A great new twist on Father/Daughter sex. I love incestuous stories (never had and never will have an incestuous affair) and this is one of the best.

Another wonderful and imaginative story! I would love to hear whether you've considered a second chapter where we get to find out more about Sam's adventures, living with her dad.

A very well written story. I absolutely loved it.

Better written than most. Keep up the good work. You have a real talent for writing.

I COMPLETELY LOVED YOUR TALE EXCEPT THE FACT THAT SHE MAY BE PREGNANT ; NOW WE HAVE TO HOPE THAT TIMING WAS IN THEIR FAVOUR . DID SHE WEAR PANTIES WITH THE DRESS WHEN THEY WENT OUT TO DINNER ?

Great story, very well written, classy tale.

Keep writing, please.

I know all those places you mention. Been to most of them, especially Haulover Beach,(the straight part)

And to all a good night. Read like it's your own story, and it was well written, with a build-up that was almost too long. I loved it. Keep going, I would like to read more about you and daddy.

Rudy

You've done it again...with another great erotic tale. Thanks. I look forward to your next story.

most impressive, now i will have to read all of your other stories. exceptionally well-written

I hate to repeat what has already been said ,but it is hard to come up with anything else.

Great Story !!!!

Thank you and please write more soon.

I'm not sure that you could have improved on your story in any way. It was simply GREAT!

I LOVED IT!!!! and i'm all nice and wet...

Great, great story! I would have liked more foreplay, reading about how much fun he had exploring the ripe tits he had dreamed about and her joy in sucking that big dick of his for the first time.

Such pain we spring on the loves of our life. Then to have the hurt kissed and made better. What a funny, sweet, terribly sexy story. Before she passed, my wife lived to love. "Love will conquer all." Damn...it even worked here...

This is a wonderful, loving story. I absolutely loved it. Romance, love, pregnancy??, incest, what more could we expect of the Great Scouries?

I only hope to see A lot moor . This was avery good storie. Do you have moor pland .on this storie?? shure hope so.

I only hope to see A lot moor . This was avery good storie. Do you have moor pland .on this storie?? shure hope so.

this was so hot! i'm so wet

I loved it. While incest doesn’t appeal to everybody, Sam and her daddy are old enough to make up their own minds. Their lives have certainly been fucked up enough so a little more can't harm! Keep going, I would like to read more, from the master, about Sam and her daddy.

Seasons Greetings from, Pete.

I think Sam "over-used" the word "Daddy".

But, other than that...,

OUTSTANDING!

your story took off slow and then picked up the speed and tempo that kept me on the edge of my seat. I'd like to know more about Sam and Rod's lovemaking.......maybe another time? StarGlyderz

I enjoyed reading your work in this tale. The length was about right. Of course many of us want mmore details about this and that. But it is your story

I loved your story.. i was so excited while i was reading it .. i honestly didnt want the story to end.. I do hope you submit more stories about The Scouries..Thank you..

Looking forward to more tales from South Fla.

this was an amazing story!!! thanks so much for the story about sam and her daddy, it made me so wet and happy. keep writing!!!!

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watch your grammar, and your misuses of "your" and "you're" sometimes distract from a good story. Good work, though!

Well written, erotic, funny and romantic. I would like to read more so get with it.

I am generally opposed to the idea of incest. However, if there is an ideal situation for incest, this may be it. An adult daughter in a terrible marriage who has clearly loved her father since childhood is reconciled with him and gets her life vastly improved by the new relationship. Very sexy and loveing story.

Nookiehunter

As a retired biological oceanographer I really enjoyed your story. Did you know that several years ago a Marine Biologist, by the name of Lilly, ran some experiments on a relationship between a male dolphin and a female aide. He wrote a book on it, but left out the actual sex. A Biologist friend of mine, and Llly's, filled me in on the details. Might make a good subject for a story. pkruse2000@highstream.net.

Mr. Scouries:

How to start? lol.... I have been reading literotica for about three years, this story of your is by far the most satisfying yet, I like how you spin a tale that requires some thought, not just "wham bam thank you mamam" lol

most storys are very thin. I guess thats okay sometimes a quick story will do, thanks for a great tale. I look forward in future for more such ingrossing submissions.

be well, be at peace and laugh often :-)

P.

Sethds2003@sbcglobal.net

I truely have to say this was a fabulous story! I totally love your play of words, and how you describe the ocean so well.Really the way you set the story, the scene and all, really allows you to feel like you are right there through the whole story, seeing it all play out before you.

Thank You Again! Hope to read more of your work soon!

TWICE !!!

ireally enjoyed you story it made me think of my daughter and how much i love her

Great Story!!! I've read probably about 300 literotica stories in the past year and this is hands down the best I've come across. The only one I've left a comment, vote, or ANY sort of feedback on.<br>

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Brian

keep up the good work you storys are fab why not go back and enhance every one with at least another chapter,truely enjoy all your writing. Homer.

a very touching story

I loved this story it was so moving how she came to know of her love for her father. And that he never gave up on his little girl. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Need to set your hook a bit faster. I only kept reading because it is late here and I have insomnia. Liked the fact that there are few misspelled words and the grammar is good.

Great story....started a bit slowly but ended well. I like the fact that you spell-checked the story. Hate reading stories with a lot of spelling and/or grammar errors.

Great story, I like a story that actualy has a story line, yours did...good work.

As I read your story, it reminded me of what has happened in my own life with my two daughters blaming me for leaving 10 years ago. I've had a secret passion for my oldest from the moment she was born. Not one of sex, but of pure love. Even today, neither of my daughters make an effort to see or spend time with me. I barely get an email from them. I wish my life would have such a happy ending to it with my daughters finally realizing just how much love I have for them. Great story... I'll enjoy reading more I'm sure.

I am trying to read all of your stories, but lose track of the titles I have read. I sometimes click on one and then recognize it. I now realize I should vote again on it, otherwise it appears that someone didn't vote.

I absolutely loved it. I've been reading your stories over the past few weeks and find your style unmatched, your skill exceptional, and your stories HOT!

I hope you never loose your entheusiasm for writing and submitting your stories here. BRAVO (standing ovation)

Mike ;-)

Loved it!

loved it write more about them please

Great the great workthe wonderful story Love, tenderness, touches. Nothing rude. 'Love is in the air!'...

I simply enjoyed! I am a woman, yes...

.....Great story, great ending,great reading....thanx again for your talent in writing....much enjoyed....

I love happy endings. Really didn't like Sammi at first but when she discovered her true love I envied her.Wonderful story. A little more intimate discription, drawn out would be nice.

there is something about this story that makes it so special. You have done a wonderful job. Bravo

One of the things I love your stories is that the journey is always as good as the destination. You're like Rumpelstiltskin, you have a gift of spinning words into gold.

Beautifully written, amazingly erotic

You are a great Author. Your writing skills are great. I just love your writing. your stories are fantastic and writing skills are just FANTABULOUS. Thanks. Do keep on writing. We love it. And love you too. rnb_ms@yahoo.com

Well written! Loved it. Add details - how was it having large cock after 4 yrs, how did she taste, ect ..how is he gonna like her having his baby, like her round, drinking her milk ect

another good addition to the credit of jim scouries

and this is definitely one, and romantic as well,,,very happy ending..we love happy endings! wished i had a family like that,,we did not get along very well, dad slept in my room, a separate bed,,mom said she was not well,needed space,,,very odd situation,,oh well,,,loved this story, ty!

Mr. Scouries,

Wonderfully written and another master piece. Thank you for the great reading and sheer joy of making a person feel like they are right there like a fly on the wall watching, seeing, feeling like they are right there in the moment. Very well written,

larry

I haven't finished the story, but I wanted to mention: umm...at the beginning, that whole "where my love of writing came from" bit...was REALLY choppy and awkward. It felt like a hack job to be honest. I only mention it because I know from your other work that you could've done better. ;)

I have to be honest Scouries, this isn't typical of your best efforts. In fact, it lacks a good hook, and fails to feel complete. Sorry mate. I love your work, but this piece blows chunks.

Learn when, and when not, to use commas.

You are a great writer. I must say bravo.

I'm not into incest, but like to read the stories. Everybody knows that it takes time to write a story, and yes, typo errors will creep in.

Not every story will be a masterpiece. The people with all the negative comments, write a story (20-30,000 words) post it, let the people decide if it is better or not.

Peter Brits

I love stories like this and the way you tell them. I was reading some of the other comments from people who are criticizing your typos or use of comas but to chicken shit to put their name on their comments. I say fuck them, I think your way of telling a story is what counts. Keep it up.

Sweet Jesus this is a cumming story. God I loved it!

As a daddy, they needed to have a good-looking, smart, gentle and sexy. Wish this kind of daddy is everywhere all around the world

you are one in a million. thank you for all of your stories.o

The real story here is the reconciliation between father and daughter. The daughter in her 20's, married for several years unhappily finally learns not to blame daddy for her troubles. The sex, really, is almost incidental to their love story. You almost always imbue your characters with a wonderful, or very sad, story to tell. This almost always is resolved with love and the blessing of children. Thank you for your body of work. By the way, my wife love the dolfins and she wasn't always my wife! This a great tale. A DOLFIN TALE!

Beautifully written"."...

A love story between a father and his daughter, and one that is difficult to match or top.

I've never loved a story more in my life. So beautiful, perfect story, plot twists, and an ending that left me satisfied in more than one way. Lots of love for this, ~ Mur

Great romantic story. It's nice to have a happily ever after between father/daughter pair...

Very good. only one spelling error that i remember and one pair of wet panties

Loved it, must be the mood I feel. Christmas in Miami is probably a bit warmer than a damp March in Cumbria. I wonder how many more babies they can make, perhaps you can let us know sometime.

Great story! I couldn't put it down, even though I was called to supper. Just kidding, because supper time is family time. But, I did finish after supper. Great story and please keep writing, I just love your writings,

I normally don't have much interest in this type of erotica, but the writing was so well done that it actually held my interest from beginning to end.

BTW, I don't know that you're male or female. But, you turned on me, I am a virgin beautiful stud from India just 30. I really want to make love with anyone's smart daddy <3

I'm a little late but thank you for the innocence and the sexual arousing that I got from reading your story

Oh my... I wish you were still writing. I absolutely love your writing style. When I see your name I know I have a guaranteed good story ahead of me to read. Thank you!!

(6/28/2021) Another enjoyable read. Not much sex but not much was really needed. This was a nice feel-good Christmas story. But I do need to say that the dolphin ride was a bit out there. Still, it was nice to fantasize about such a scene. The setup was so well done, it could have been used as a story plan for a long series using much of this story as its last chapter, IMO. This is your last submission for 2005 and I've read all 11 of your 2005 stories. I really hated your first story and trashed it (It was really really awful), but your 11/24/2005 "French Niece ??" was Brilliant. I also really liked your (Romance genre) 6/11/2005 "Miss Kiss" about the Brit (Aussi?) soldier and the young troubled med student story very much. I hope your still receiving email alerts for comments being posted. I'm taking a break and then moving on to your long 2006 list. I need to poke my stick at other talented writers and not let you monopolize my time and expert commentary. Gee, I'm so full of myself sometimes.

Awesome love story between Dad and Sam

That something with such a sad start has such a very joyful ending (or restart) has made this day a very happy one for this octogenarian. Thanks.

sweet, sexy and sad for a divorce and years of lost love between a Dad and Daughter. as a father of 4, oldest being 10 when I divorced, I know the "sad, lost years"

Please learn the difference between your and you're.

yeah

Wow, after this declaration from both how can you just end it so abruptly!!

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Daddy didn't promise Sam exclusivity at the end....in 6 weeks he has the Batgirl, dancers, cheerleaders....write more

17yr old slut Sammie falls gorgeous 43yr old aging horny Prof. She really was a loser!!

Did Daddy say he will also be exclusive

Stupid Sammie gets a second chance in life because of Daddy!! 5 🌟

Ahhhh...traditionally dolphins have sex with girls. But, this is ONLY a story.

Great holiday story

5 stars

Five Stars! We all knew how it would.e d but what a great way of getting there.

LeB