All Comments on 'Sweet Music'

I read all kinds of stories on this site and occassionally read the Gay Male ones and this is the Hottest story I've ever read. I really liked it. I just wanted to let you know that you did an awesome job and I can't wait to read more stories from you. Good luck in all stories!!! This was hot!!!!!!

this straight female thanks you,, for getting me all 'hot 'n bothered'!

... an awesome combination. The characters, the plot, the sex ... what a fantastic story, Tom. I hope we get to see more of Dusty and Chris in the near future.

And to think that Dusty fell for Chris that fast, Wow!

What can I say? This was sensual, sexual, emotional, and all the other -al words that are possible. Honest, truly believeable and a great joy to read.

I think I've found another author I'll keep my eye out for.

Good job! Keep it up... I know it kept me up.

Both sex and characters were like music. They played their tunes true and strong, harmonizing all the way, from Dusty's straight best friend, to Chris' shyness, to Dusty's lust. All real and strong, even the parts involving the music scene on stage and off. Out of bed or in, you have a way of putting your reader there. Fantastic sex scenes. Some of the best I've read.

I can't wait for Chris to get strung out on rock.

..And roll! I meant....because he's in a band...get it? Oh hell, you know I'd love anything you cranked out of that wacky head of yours. Seriously though, in your next installment to this story, will Chris be taking Dusty on tour with him? Will the band bottom out? Will they be asked to sell out to a pepsi commercial? The world needs to know.

Where did you learn to write like that Tom? The story absolutely embodies the strong physical lusty passion of men at love...just for kicks...do you or will you write about women? I'm curiuos to see what you do with the other sex...hmmmm?

So smooth. You're realism is amazing. All of the strong emotions portrayed in a fun,lighthearted,smooth way. Well done and so very enjoyable. Thank you.

jgywnn

Honey, this is one hot story - I think I'm in love with your boys! :)

Great characters with crisp and strong personalities makes it easy for the reader to fall into it and oh, not mention the hawt sexy, sex!

This story was fabulous!! I have rarely see its equal. Thank you for on hell-of-a read. :) I look forward to reading more of your work.

Wow what a fantastic love story, beautiful and erotic. I didnt want it to end. Im adding this to my favourites so that I can read it on days when Im feeling down and need to be reminded that there is still some magic left in the world. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all.

Kind regards, Marie

WOW the more i read of your work the better it gets, i do hope that you write a second part for them.

Thankyou

I can't believe I've just found this story. It was simply amazing. I love the characters, loved the sex. Chris was absolutely adorable and as for Dusty, well, he was just plain hot! Loved it loved it loved it. The language was used perfectly and the story flowed seamlessly. I particularly liked you linking the fact that Chris is a singer with the pleasurable noises he made during sex. Good work!

SUPERHOT SEX is at the heart of this wonderful tale of true love. It starts off well, but you figure it'll probably be: "Hi, guy! Let's fuck!" But the two men discover tender devotion while romping through a series of A#1 orgasms achieved by truly caring for the partner's joy. It's virtually a textbook on the finest gay lovemaking. I'd love to know about their development from here on. (The lady editor must be a dandy woman.) I absolutely adore this story!!

I LOVE IT!!!!!

It's of those erotically romantic...

I'm signing up just to add this in my favorites...

This is one of the best written stories on Literotica, and I really enjoyed it. It's humorous and romantic at the same time, and I admit, I've read it more than once. I think you should continue it.

is a greate story and hope you continuet, to know were the relationship goes.... plees

What an awesome story...too bad you didn't continue the story. It needs about 10 more chapters...it's just too short.

Loved it!!!!!!

Passionate and sweet with the perfect pace.

The whole "daddy" and "sex kitten" was kind of tacky, but overall great story.

Need to continue. Please I would like to read more about them n Deb an Jed.

Lovely - not perfect, but some nice humour and originality (not often seen on this site), and some of what I like most - signs that a love might actually last. :-)

Well that was just the perfect story, wasn't it.

Really, that hot? Wonder why am only reading this now. Great great stuff.

I mean how did I miss this absolutely sssiiizzzzllliiinggg scorching story? ???

I know it's been awhile since you've written anything on this sitem but I would love an update. I loved the story!

Thanks

There are two phrases that are 1) ridiculously overused 2) meaningless 3) shouldn't be allowed on this site: "to say the least" and "couldn't help but." It should be the first rule of writing: eliminate as many words as you can, especially ones that mean nothing.

I. Loved. This