by RedHairedandFriendly
I truly loved your story i know what its like on the farm you never get tired of it or the people in it you did have some mistakes in the spelling but it was still a great story i hope you continue with more chapters with Pamela and Trent.
p.s his girlfriend was a crasy to do that to trent but trent made out better with the blue ribbon.
Oh God, what a beautiful story of love and passion. I love sexual things but i love love more and when both are present it is the most wonderful thing in the world. Keep up the good work, you are very talented.
George
This was a beautiful piece of writing. The combination of love and love making mixed with the details of a normal farming day was in my opinion perfect. I've not left a comment in 2 years of reading stories here but this story demanded that I post one. Thank you for my favorite story on this site.
this is what you do best!...I love the story, the emotion and passion...it's in the story that you excel...and the sex is so passionate yet erotic...a great write by an even greater writer...<kisses>
DC:
When you write a story I know I'm going to love reading it. This one was no different. Great love story, great sex. Can't ask for more. Thank You. Ronnie W.
That was one of the best I have read in a long time! Great language, smooth story line, and really terrific sex - it really hit the spot!
Two people in need of each other like it was preordained with no shame just lust with respect entwined.
This is so close to memories of a teenage country boy and a new young widow.
Thank you
What a great story - the tension grew by the page. My first time reading your work - I look forward to more, a novella perhaps?
Loved it. The seduction was so mutual and so smooth and natural. This was a beautiful story.
Why didn't you put more of an emphasis on the fact that there is a 30-year age difference between the two characters?
Although doggy-style may not be considered romantic or sensual, you still managed to make it sound beautiful and classy and I commend you for that. And it is fitting, since they are on a farm and that is the way animals do it, right? So it works well. Most of all, the dialogue between the 2 characters is really passionate, emotional, and realistic. You did a wonderful job of bringing them to life. That may have been my favorite part.
Dearest Ms Red,
I am just an avid reader of many fine stories held within this website but this work of yours was beautiful to read and feel.
The compassion love and eroticism from you was lovely.
Thank you.
Peter
What a lovely story. Great ending too. I only wish you would have added a few scenes where he spread her cheeks and sniffed, licked and tongue fucked her asshole. Maybe even had some balls deep anal too. The story was still amazing. Thank you.
You haven't met the right farmers.
It takes skilled farmers to grow the grapes.