by caprine
Although somewhat unrealistic, I found your story to be very erotic. It has long been a fantasy of mine to see my wife, Marianne, used in front of an audience and become the subject of lust and desire for a large group! Keep up the good work.
okay, i got off like three time thanks to that one story! omg thank you! i know what i'm reading from now on!!! *wink wink*
wonder how many guys have been strocking,while reading this erotic story and cum before its end.
Just like me !
Great
Keep it up
stuff dreams are made of.... but what a story, one ive dreamt of thats for sure.
I normally like your style but, while the story line was excellent, your dialogue was somewhat confusing. Your use of the 'first person' necessitated frequent use of a 'third person' to keep our heroine in the picture - not the best of style! I gave you full marks for the very entertaining story line! Pete.
Because of your use of a blindfold on your "heroine" the story became disjointed and confusing & truth be told there really wasn't any need for the blindfold once she was on stage.