All Comments on 'Study Buddies Ch. 02'

Great story. Good read, but you need dialogue between your characters in the love scenes. Short sentences / questions between the two should do it. I like your stories....keep up the good work!!...smiles.

Nice idea and lovely description of tender, but passionate fucking.

Contrary to a previous comment, I think description of action and thoughts is fine. I don't need any dialogue to feel, understand and imagine the sexual power encompassing these two (or three or four or however many might be involved).

Write what you feel.

It's me again. I didn't realize when I wrote about Ch. 1 that you already had several chapters "in the bank."

This one was vast improvement, I thought, after a good opening chapter. I look forward to reading more, though the approach of some of the later chapters isn't my kind of subject, but I may take a look anyway. You never know. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. ! ! !