All Comments on 'Storms Never Last Ch. 03'

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The NavigatorThe Navigatorabout 14 years ago
Another winner

Jake, your story telling skills continue to amaze me. It is just too bad you are feeding this wonderful story to us a page at a time. I'm not a fan of serialized stories, but in your case the wait is worth it.

bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Pleasurable Read

Being addicted to LW I, of course, thought the separation in Peru was going to bring problems and then when Acey went to Amarillo I was sure that younger man was going to interrupt the sequence but I guess that when Jake says romance, it is romance! Nice readable text and interesting people.

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexabout 14 years ago
Great read

look forward to the next part

oldwayneoldwayneabout 14 years ago
It has been such a fine story.

I am looking forward to reading the final chapter. Jake, you have been one of my favorites for a long time now. There are very few that can equal you in telling the fine stories that you tell. Thanks so much for all that you do.

northlandernorthlanderabout 14 years ago
Tremendous

Jake

It is stories like this that keep me coming back to Literotica. Your development from your earliest stories is really good. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long for the next chapter in the lives of Stephen and Acey

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Hmm - she is linear alright!

A simple gal with simple needs - sheeit lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Inconsistency

He met Acey while staying on her parents' ranch, but yet didn't recognize them when they came to visit. Please try to be consistent across the different chapters.

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