by TwistedPlayr
Absolutely loved the story, but next time have someone edit the story. It had alot of typos.
Hell i didnt have time to worry about the typo's!!! This is an incredible piece of work as well as the first one. Keep up the good work and i better run to the store for some more batteries...lol!
was that Konala oil or extra virgin all I can say send Brida my way willing to give it a go
Makes me wish I was right in the middle of the action! So hot! More!
There were a few typos but they didn't detract from the easy flow and the pace of the story at all for me. I like the set-up and the whole thrust of the story but would like to know more of what happens after the food arrives. Keep up the good work. Atillakiss
I'm a bi woman and love watching and/or reading about couples, and more, including bi men, enjoying each other. Yes, there were a few typos, but they didn't distract from the overall story. My fingers were far too busy to worry about spelling...
Very exciting and leaving me wanting more. After reading the story I'm as hard as Josh, it must be the bi in me coming out.
Thanks for adding part two. Now I definitely need to have this happen to me.
Very erotic, but the writer missed an opportunity that should never be missed…Penny should have been there to watch her husband suck his first cock.