by bluedragonauthor
I have not read BDA for quite some time. I'm glad I discovered this series. I am accustomed to Loving Wife stories; therefore, on page 1 I was expecting Kelly would turn out to be a cheater. These two female friends don't seem to be constrained in any way re "their men." I wonder if we'll meet either of them before the story ends. Excellent punctuation. The I vs. me kinds of errors needed some attention.
You have a great gift in your writing style. The subtle needs to be a shade more subtle and the sex is great.
As soon as emotions become involved, somebody's going to get hurt!
I love the way you build charecters. You understand people and make us want to know them. I look forward to future installments.
I read your story in two sittings and was eager to finish and now I will eagerly find your next submission