by Rowanberry
I think this story was placed in the wrong catagory. To my way of thinking being an immortal empath (telepath?) doesn't mean being nonhuman. If anything, those conditions should promote being far more human.
I love this story so totally!!!!!!!!! PLEase do write the second to it asap!
Best short story of any kind I've read in a while. This is what love making should be like. you took one of my favorite wet dreams and put it into writing. You must be an empath to some extent yourself.
If only if only I could experience sex like that!!!!!! That's what sex should be like an intermingling of souls.
Even without the intro to the charactors, this story was fabulous!!! I really enjoyed it! Hope to see more.
Please Hurry Must Read More of Your Incredible Work
This has to be the most fantastic bit of erotic storytelling I've seen in a long time. I only wish there was more!
More? NOW!!! Please?!?!?!! =^_^= I love the passion and the exchange between them, hence why I NEED MORE PLEASE!! Blessed Be and Merry Part =^_^=