All Comments on 'So Warm'

Hey The Earl :) Your story was very engaging and I really enjoyed it. I guess from your story tags that he was a vampire, although I was thinking he was a demon or something cuz I've never heard of a vampire being invisible. So that was something new and different :) The only thing that I caught was that you switched once or twice from present tense to past and then back, but other than that it was perfect :)

Happy Halloween.

I adored this piece! Certainly got my blood pumping I can assure you!

very erotic and scary at the same time! Good luck in the contest!

Great story, as ever! I love the way it's set in a library!

… the image of the sliding the gypsy skirt up her thighs. ;) Luck in the contest!

Hot. Hothothothothot.

Also making me take note not to do late nights at Uni *G*

damn, that was good. Love the detail, the fear. Very good.

A fine job of scene setting and tension building in such a short story. Great read.

Rumple

.. but why couldn't she feel her blouse being opened?

Lukas

You can see this author growing in both skill and confidence. I lik ethis one, but I know the next will be even better. Well done :)

Loved your story, good luck with the contest.

Mirriam

Nice work... didn't even need a coffee

this morning. This woke me up, just fine!

Makes me feel hot, yet gave me goosebumps, how did you do it? You might take a look at the consistency of some things. Tis just detail, I know I'm a perfectionist.

Took your story with me into the bath. Enjoyed myself thoroughly.

*wonderful*

goosebumps from that. Great story.

nice one.

got me nice and wet..

I can't believe this is written by a guy..

I thought this kinda fantasy is something only girls would

write..... :P

Though I love it :P

I like your placing of the detail it had me feeling like was in the same room.

If foreplay were an Olympic sport, you'd be a top competitor. Your writing is great. Your dialogue is clear & interesting. Your sex scenes are exactly the type I'd hope a man could create (and you have no idea how many men write so poorly to try not evoking a true passion,except for the man, but you succeeding in surpassing the common person). I love the fact that your story has a supernatural (was he a ghost, a vampire?I'm not sure but doesn't really matter--great story anyway). I have a feeling your other stories will be good, but I think this one might be my favorite. Hey, I know what I like :)