All Comments on 'Skipping the Turkey Baster'

This turned into a great surprise! It was a very original concept and one that would touch the heart of any person who wanted a child but was not a so called conventional parent. I found myself caring about all the characters and you handled a very difficult topic with sensitivity and humor. A great read. Thanks.

Even a confirmed straight guy can get into this tender and funny tale.

Predictable once we learn the orientation of the people involved, but well written and constructed.

Thank you Green_Gem for this long awaited, fabulous story!!!

BBE

Crosses the line!

OMG.. this was a wonderful story. A nice change from the quick suck and fuck stories that I usually read.. not that they are bad. You really outdid yourself with this one. Kudos! Paul

That was a cute story, with just the right touch. Waiting for More Green_Gem!

This was a tender and hot story. The friendship of Morgan and Josh with their shared loss plus the conflict with Lynn over having her own baby was great contrast. OOOhhh the humanity

Everyone had their cake and ate it too!

A lot of emotion mixed with a little bit of reality and joy.

I would like to see them become a total 4 some at some point.

Well played out story.

lovingly executed, by turns humorous, sweet, and sexy. Good luck in the contest....

Maybe it's because I didn't skip the turkey baster, but this story had me in tears. Beautiful, hot and enough to laugh about too.

You did a great job with the conflicting wants and worries that accompany such a decision. Very well done.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

This definitely isn't a stroke story, although I was aroused in places--But it is an extremly well written story. One that shows the authors wisdom, and understanding of our human differences and how they interact!

Jayde You know everything you write ranks a 10 with me!

Great work!

Very, very nice story to read. I loved the multiple levels that it operates on, and, oh yeah, the fucking at the end was incredibly hot!!!

Well done!

You have written a mini-masterpiece. Beautiful work...Good luck!

Cookie :)

A thoughtful masterpiece by Lit's most daring writer. Green Gem once again pushes the envelope by choosing a difficult theme, taking an original approach, and twisting the ending in her own original way. I loved it, and I'm thrilled to enjoy this latest effort. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Thank you. Great story!

As always green Gem has written something far above the norm. This story explores new territory in a sensitive, literate and erotic way. A wonderful way with words..."Josh's throat was dry. His stomach was knotted tighter than a hangman's noose"...only Green Gem comes up with descriptions THAT good!

Not the common plot line, but plausible. You've created some vulnerable characters in a tenuous relationship, but they sort it out in the end (pun intended). Great story. Your writing is special. We'd like to see more of your stories.

I did not see where this was going until the climax (as it were).

Thanks for a very entertaining and unexpectedly hot story.

Thank you for your story. Really well done. Captured the emotion and feelings. And it was hot. Keep up the great work.

But the heterosexual sex is just blah. All the foreplay is between two women. The 'act' is no more erotic than a dildo.