by maggie2002
he may have 'died and gone to heaven'
but so did I <grin> capital reading
hey maggie long time~
great ... no wait ... paramount story~
this story has it all romance, erotic, sex
and most of all Valentines, excellent tale
good luck and happy lovers day~ (~_*)
Art~
I have a few years to go yet until Im this age, but when I am I hope its something like this! A delightful story, well done and thank you
Silky is the woman of my dreams! I am just the right age, with just enough experience to be in romantic, erotic heaven with a woman like her
Michael
I truly was going to rate this very highly and then the english and spelling starts to get sloppy. SHe licked under his tentacles? that lost it for me....too bad,,,,had good potential
Mag, it was a wonderful story, but the spelling and grammar and yes, tentacles, made me laugh so hard I lost the mood. Please, please, next time run it by an editor before submitting. Otherwise, a sexy tale. Overall, I enjoyed it.
The lady throws one hell of a party. This horny 'ol sailor wouldn't mind being the guest.
With some real mature sex!! Thanks for sharing.