by Lady Jayne
winter sex outside...it's so amazing. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Warm & wonderful... a real pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing & very best of luck to you in the contest!
I really enjoyed this. I can see myself and my husband in the begining. We're playful like that, throwing snowballs at each other and such. Thanks for the story. Good Luck! K.
Excellent story, had everything one looks for.
Wish you all the best in the competition.
That's one of the better jobs of writing in second person that I've come across. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Rumple
I almost didn't submit my story because it was written in second person, but seeing your's here gave me a bit of courage. You wrote a beautifully erotic romantic story.
Very romantic and hot story, LJ! It gave me tingles. Good luck!
What a sweet, sexy story! I usually look for 'naughtier' stories, but I loved this. It's like a nice little glimpse of my boyfriend and me.