All Comments on 'Shelby's Office'

Well written solid and sexy story. I want to change my name to JIm!!

Very Sexy, reads easily and the flow is good. This could make me like valentines day!

Hot story, loved the setting, had sex once with a woman in the luchroom when we both worked late. Reminded me of those fond memories. thank you.

Has potential, but please put in separate paragraphs! It's hard to read in this format and seems like you (the author) don't have a clear organization.

Okay, fixed the obscure 1800 word single paragraph. I could have sworn that wasn't the way I submitted it. Fixed now.

The revision helps immensely. I reread the story, and it flows much better -- very hot! Keep writing for us!

I like the setup in the beginning, so that we feel we know this woman and her quirks pretty well. That knowledge makes what unfolds that much more erotic.