All Comments on 'She Danced'

What's next?

I _do_ wonder!

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John

Absolutly brilliant,this story is highly erotic and also provides a deep look into a emotional woman's heart and mind.One of the most talented writting I've ever read,such an incredible and innovative style.

That was good.

Such a fully realised character Aki is. Her motivations, drives and emotions so fully explored and described.

And the writing! It blew me away. So good!

Damn fine job, Liar!

Jesus, Liar. I had no idea.

"But right there, and right then, she was nothing short of divine." That line captures the moment of giving over, of letting go, of that transition from thinking to simply feeling, so perfectly. Beautiful, flawed, real characters developed with a poet's words. You're brilliant.

I'm in awe Liar, brilliantly painted, vividly captured.

This is brilliant and just staggering. The combination of wonderful characterization and a genuinely delightful and superb control of language yield a sumptuous prose poem with a hot and desperate carnality unmitigated by the sheer beauty of the thing. I loved every word of this.

Wonderful character development and insightful description of both her mental processes. Well done background descriptions too.

I hope you decide to continue the story, developing Jasper's character more deeply, and hopefully turn this casual meeting into a full fledged romance!

Liar, that was amazing. All of it, the descriptions, the emotions, the hiding....everything.

Very well written with vivid characterization and inner complexities. I hope to see the relationship between Aki and Jasper develop further. Loved it!

There is nothing more I can say. Simply excellent.

Poetry in motion and one of the best damn stories I've read anywhere.

How did I miss this when it was first posted? Thank you so much for calling my attention to it now. Extraordinary! ~Imp

The best damn thing I've ever read, anywhere. Seriously, this is pure class. Brilliant in every sense.

I couldn’t really get into this story. It was a little too surreal, too much abstract B.S. Just not my kind of story.