All Comments on 'Sergeant Sebastian's Vacation'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice beach story!

I wish that had been me and my hubby on the beach. It's my fantasy also. Maybe this August when we are on vacation!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hmmm

I'll be honest, I got all excited to see Sergeant Sebastian's name again, but I was quite disappointed with the depiction of the characters this time around. A complete about face from the original story. I would have rather you changed the characters for this one and saved Sarge and Sheronda for the original storyline.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinalmost 18 years ago
What's the name of that island?

Sounds like a fun couple to me. Granted, this is part of a series, but I wish the post had a more complete feel. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

sacksackalmost 18 years ago
better than the giraffe story.....

but I can't see how this relates to the contest theme at all except that they got naked to have sex, as most people would do. Two dimensional characters, I had difficulty relating to them.

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