All Comments on 'Second First Kiss'

The scattering of Gaelic was no problem... mere seconds with Google.

I particularly liked the sense of place in the return to Ireland! It was well done with a lot of emotion. Some of the sadness you might find echoed in my next story.

I like this by far more than any of your other stories.

Thanks for sharing with us!

DJ

timeliness, and sadness that seeped into your words. I love stories about Ireland and the magic of that land so far from where I am. I quite enjoyed this. Good luck with the contest.

you get an "a" for originality! Good luck!

nice job of writing.... good luck with the contest.

I have only come across your stories the last couple of days and I must say that you are a writer of quality. I find your style to have the right degree of sensuality to keep the reader interested without degenerating into smut (not that I don’t love a bit of smut from time to time - LOL). I must say that as good as they were, I liked this tale far more than any of your other stories. Declan, you had this ‘decrepit old man’ crying shamelessly! Thanks for such a heart warming tale.

Your Story Has Gone To The Very Place In My Mind Where All Things Are Possible. You Have Stirred Up Some Very Strong Feelings In This Old Man. Thank You.

A truly magic story, ...

I enjoyed it and would like to thank you for this beautiful piece of love you shared with us!

What a wonderful and magical tale. Well done 5-stars