- Romance
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Click hereI reached for her hand and quietly asked, "Will you marry me?"
"Yes...oh god yes" she whispered as tears of joy ran down her face.
Mary's voice boomed over the two of us. "I guess this bozo isn't as dumb as he looks."
- COMMENTS
UncertainT1 day agoThe first story on Lit that I loved, I was still anonymous then. It's been a long time but it is still at the top of my all time favourites.
Niceguy200012 days ago862 comments, must be a record.
Very well done, too bad the author doesn't post here any longer...or he/she has a new name.
Very well done.
Gardenshed19 days agoRead this story again and still a very good read. An escape from the real world for a short time.
ILYAWBabout 1 month agoI love this story so much I read it several times a year. Romance should be one of the tags, along with it being in the roamnce category. If you review the story list, better than 90% of the stories are labeled as HOT. The sad thing, this person hasn't added new content in years.
Collectively, our loss
Anonymousabout 1 month agoI agree with myself from eight months ago. Well conceived and developed. Surely worth Five solid stars.
JPB NOT BOB
RomanticGingerabout 1 month agoThe guy a few comments below me (The Hoary Cleric), makes a great point, and makes me wish you could upvote comments.
LovesDancingabout 2 months agoI love reading stories like this on Literotica, full of joy and hope and amazing people.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoAn absolute delight of a story....ticks every box for a great read....like a dish where every ingredient is perfectly balanced...was just hoping the story to never end, perhaps some longer stories in future if the author deems fit please
Anonymousabout 2 months agoInteresting. I read this story perhaps a year ago and put it on my favourites list.
I needed a good story to read for a bit of a pick-up on a dark and rainy day and was surprised. !) the story was shorter than I remembered and 2) I did not remember the sexual activity.
The point I am making is that a really great story is not about sex but about people who are special and do special things. For the Literotica crowd (with the possible exception of the non-erotic people) the sex is the main thing,
One author brilliantly pointed out the change in Literotica over the years as having ore and more great stories often with important lessons about living fulfilling lives. This is an amazingly popular story and makes that author's points.
AUTHORS: get a clear non-erotic plot, develop real life characters and THEN and ONLY THEN deal with the erotic. Several authors are dog that and their ratings usually are 4.5 plus. I find such worthwhile stories predominantly in Romance and mon-erotic, but also in LW and interracial. Sadly wen searching for a story I usually find only one for every 2-3 pages of search (50 each).
The Hoary Cleric
