All Comments on 'Reverse Masquerade'

Beautiful and unusual - I loved that you took a pretty normal fantasy and turned it into something dark and sensual and deep. It wasn't long, but it did the job well and definitely wasn't just a literary porno. Sexy and erotic and gorgeous and, let's face it, an event I'd absolutely want to go to. Thank you!

Reminded me of Anais Nin.

That was fascinating!! hot, erotic, frightening and intriguing...

i'm off to read more of what you have to offer!

I was going to say "another hot and intriging story" but almost all of your stories are this good - you're an amazing writer:)

The present tense lessened some of the enjoyment for me, as did a couple of brief POV shifts, but the psych aspect rings true -- and there lies the strength of your tale. Nicely done!

I didn't expect to enjoy it. I'm not even sure "enjoy" is the right word. But I couldn't look away, and I wasn't sorry.

I envy the way you play with ideas, unafraid.

Sure, it's a hot story. Even if I don't like that kind of mask much.

But I find the thoughts on identity or the lack of it far more interesting. Good material for a longer story, exploring the concept.

Good luck.

Amazing. I'm begging you, more, more!

Very erotic, original, hot and forbidden! I love it!

I can't wait to see the movie. You are a fine story teller and have a real knack for keeping descriptions fresh and inviting. Thank you for your contribution.