All Comments on 'Remember Me'

Thank you for a very sweet story. You have a beautiful way with words.

haunting. Fantastic story that said so much in so few words. You should write more romance.

and so well told, my darling. Beautiful choices of words, all the way through.

The two characters are very well drawn, and that waltz in the snow is a haunting image- I love that-

A story I can relate to all too well.

Very nicely done, Abs.

I bet you had your fuzzy pink bunny slippers on when writing this. :) If so, keep 'em handy. Congrats for trying something new AND on doing it so well.

Rumple

God, Abs. You've turned me into a watering pot with this one. So poetic and sad, and the part about Italy made me jealous as all hell. Wonderful job, and good luck.

and bravely different. Beautifully written.

Brava.

sweetsubsarahh

So this is the second time I'm reading it and my eyes are moist again. You closet romantic! You do this too well. Do it more often. *sniff*

What a refreshing, heart warming, appealing love story! Contrary to what others might say, I didn't find it sad -- although I cried a bit. I found it so fundamentally soul baring that I lived right along with the characters.

You are a very gifted writer....

I know it's yer first romance.. but reading It, I'd think it was polished by practice. What more can you ask but a great story full of emotion? Thank you for a great read.

You're going to lose your reputation for being surly. Very nice work, here! *kiss* ~Imp

but then, you knew i thought that. always, you amaze me with the different aspects of your characterizations. well done, wench.

*love ya*

v~

but very sad story, with well defined characters.

They had a love for the ages and you did a beautiful job of telling us about it.

Great job- you shouldn't have been at all worried about venturing into romantic territory. :)

I bawled almost completely through this! You did an excellent job on character development and the love they felt for each other practically leapt off the page. Very touching.

gently poignant and worth a second read (and more!) Good luck!

You have an eloquent way with words that makes us feel your characters. Wonderful story!

Don't you know you're not supposed to make readers cry with a romance story?

On the surface it is a sad story but so full of love. Seems to me, it's a testimony to the old saying "better to lose a love than never have loved at all".

Black Tulip

Your characters are wonderful.

This is a truly moving piece!!

Very best of luck to you...

and very sad...

... but terribly romantic, nonetheless. Very nicely done.

Well woven tale Abs, thanks

Hugo

...it is absolutely brilliant. Wonderful start to branching out, please continue, sis.

You write about the complexities of the human condition with gentle elegance and deceptive simplicity.

Very glad you had the courage to write this.

Nirvana

This is among the best romance stories I've ever read. You should definitely do more of these! (I KNEW that bitchy personna was only an act!!!) lol Nice job!

Remember Me was so well done, you must continue to write these "stories" for all of us. One of the best ever!

To simply say "Thank you" is not enough. So much love, so much dignity....an amazing story. Everyone should read it...ten times. People who have never lived without the one they love can not understand, even comprehend the brutal pain.

Thank you.

this drivel is mentally ill lesbo crap!

there is no romance in lesbianism...what rubbish!

Two people so deeply in love but at the time could only express it at certain places what a shame she died so early..

This should be labeled GAY Romance. Please stick this in the proper place. Thanks.

Very well written. I love your writing style and think it is some of the best I have seen here on literotica.

I have just written my first ever story and would love for you to read it and let me know your thoughts and critique.

(A Tale of Two Wives 001)

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