by LuciousBi-Writes4U
i really like this story, not use to seeing non-erotic stuff from you. and the detail is great. everything erotic has to start with the pluetonic and build from there.
where do these people live? no repect or the intellect to enjoy a good tale without spatting their venomous hatred onto others. Sorry Lucious that you were left a turd remark but you have to expect that they do not speak for those of us who enjoy a story for its worth and content, not fault it because they probably did not even read it <grin
have a great day and please keep writing, just use a close pin to avoid the stink of those that we must take measures with like...having compassion for their ignorance.