by geronimo_appleby
A pleasure to read...and I liked the reveal of the name of the end.
A really good story - nice concept, hot sex... I agree that you didn't need to reveal what the name meant at the end; it was obvious at that point.
Nicely done! A great read. Very hot...
I do share EL's thoughts RE the ending.
Oooooh! Geronimo, this is a deliciously naughty piece of writing... I love it! :)
Wow. Hot wolf sex. I didn't know I had it in me to be so taken... :-P Very nice, good luck to you.
Great story. I'd love to hear more about Sabrina and Faolan. Don't wolves mate for life? if so, she would be his mate, right?
I really enjoyed this one... a good twist on an old tale. Very hot! Good luck!
Cookie :)
I didn't expect to enjoy wolf sex so much! Very hot, but i feel the end of the tale let it down a bit, personally, I don't think you needed to explain the name. Otherwise a great tale!
...with what the others have said. Good writing and a fresh twist on an old storyline. Congratulations.
Rumple
It could easily have been trite, but it wasn't at all. Nicely done.
A very hot story and well written. It could have been edited a little better but that did not detract from it.
how you managed to find a new twist to such an old tale. Especially one that has been done so many times. Very nice.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
an excellent erotic fairy tale
a very good twist off the old childrens tale
a very clever and erotic read....thanks Art~