All Comments on 'Pretender'

cute and sexy. you feelsexy and you are sexy..and i love your opening paragraph..sucked me right in

Colonel Sanders? Cardboard popup valentines? Boobs that shift around like adjustable seats in a car? Heavens to murgatroyde, doc, you have one bee-yoo-teeful imagination! This tickled me pink.

Cheers,

AriO

Colonel Sanders? Cardboard popup valentines? Boobs that shift around like adjustable seats in a car? Heavens to murgatroyde, doc, you have one bee-yoo-teeful imagination! This tickled me pink.

Cheers,

AriO

Lovely. Thoroughly enjoyed every word, and this sentence caught my eye, making me smile:

"Lacy wore his gaze like it was a piece of jewelry made especially for her."

Excellent job, Doc.

This was a fun fantasy which addresses the desire all of us have to change something about ourselves, and that outer appearances aren't always important.

De-mean me next please!! I Loved this little story. Nice plot. Thank you.

Such a fine blend of humour and romance.

Waiting for my special card now.

This was a fun, sexy romp of a story. :)

A crispy drumstick of a story, juicy on the inside, and served with a biscuit. Thank you, Colonel.

I've got a gift membership waiting for you in the RWA. :)

Clever, well-constructed, great characters, intriguing plot, nice twist at the end, plus some other excellent items I'm proably forgetting--not bad for what was only your second Romance.

Congratualtions, Doc, you done did good.

Rumple

Lacy's mirror sequence is worth reading by itself- it's practically a masturbation scene, only hotter.

Awww that's the cutest thing I've ever read! I don't know why but even though the main message is pretty well known it made me tear at the end. Superb!

wow.. what a great read - warming to the heart.

I find that funny. Arty received the real gift while Lacy was purely superficial, would have been more poetic if Lacy did change back but Arty loved her anyway.

Wow... love it to the end. If only every woman knew the confidence of her own skin and the beauty it reflects. If only every man could see the beauty of a confident woman.

Stellar, I can't believe I hadn't read this before when I read all of your other work. Fortunately, Penelope Street led me to this story. You are both lovely writers.

The idea of only seeing inner beauty was a derivation of a movie called Shallow Hal with Gwyneth Paltro and Jack Black. Still 5 stars. :o) because most everything written, or thought of is derived from something else.