All Comments on 'Pool's Closed'

I'll never look at a public pool the same way again...:)

Awesome. Just awesome. The only thing I would've changed was when she said she wanted him to take all her holes, I would've had him cum in each one, but hey..that's just me.

Great story.

Great story.. only thing I was left wanting was the directions to the pool! Good luck.

This was a great story. Thanks for sharing. -bluefox07

This was a great story. Thanks for sharing. -bluefox07

Did the pool thing in my younger days... Spent many a summer as a lifeguard... Having a key to the gate made midnight swims a regular event and your story matches many a memory...

Because I visualize your words as I read you lost me with:

“Suddenly he hurled himself towards her in a cannonball and she shrieked as he landed right in front of her, holding her hands up to ward off the large splash aimed for her face. With her hands in the air and her body turned away from the liquid assault, she couldn't see him under the water as he pushed off the bottom straight towards her. So it came as a complete surprise as he hit her midriff and dragged her under while she yelped.”

The human body’s shape in a cannonball produces a lot of drag, making it difficult to reach the bottom of the pool from which to push off.

Even a successful push off from the bottom would provide upward momentum he would have to reverse, not to mention the vaunted mammillary buoyancy to be overcome to drag her under.

Sorry but I don’t see it happening the way you describe it.