All Comments on 'Please Be My Valentine'

Very hot, very quickly....

great work

I have wet panties now

her smile would suddenly turn into a frown when she arrived home to find the locks changed on the doors, belongings on the front lawn, bank accounts cleaned out,car hauled off, and a copy of the tape I had made to use in divorcing her cheating slut ass.

Good short, and to the point writing.

Good job.. and good luck

I apologize to anyone I might have offended by letting others get to me. I will not bother to blame it on a bad day or any other lame excuse. Yes I deleted all the remarks and placed them in the uncalled for file to be locked away. You all have a wonderful day.

Great story, hot, short and to the point like a good porn story is suppose to read. Not all long and drawn out with step by step movement. You allow the readers mind to grow.

hot as always *kisssssssssssss*

bit too telescoped for my taste. Not really smutty enough or detailed enough to be a good stroke story and too short to be anything else.

Royal Jamaican delights <grin nice and sizzling, good luck and thanks for the erotic literary journey! (~_*)

and good luck in the contest!

for my taste, to be honest. I think the story would be even better if you had taken the time for some build up of tension. Just my opinion.

One thing that bothered me was the switching from present to past to present.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

It was great, your great and I am glad I am your lover

Short, but very hot!