All Comments on 'Photographic Memory'

I have read a lot of stories, and this is a really good one. I will certainly be looking for further submissions.

Very close to how it is in these situations. Well done.

a very nice well written story, very sexy loved how it was writen with the dares

That was HOT HOT HOT!!! I would love to go to a place like that. Very well written, extremely erotic and sexy. Let's hear more!!!

Out of sight - please do more

This is a very sexy story. Hopefully they will keep up the daring game when they get home...after a video with Judy of course

a job well done. fantasy in realistic terms. very well written. congrats.

Wonderful Erotic respectful consentual sharing with sensual build. You created great understandable depth of characters and suroundings. Most of all it was fair and agreed upon as it grew. He took control of her sensual aggresiveness and set conditions that balanced the moment. No one appeared to be emotionaly hurt or disrespected and the afterward short term uncertainy for each made it seem very human. Marital sharing themes are thorny - too often an author feels someone must lose or that it must be unfair to be readably erotic. Failing the fairness what results is disrespectful sick crap which many of us have already lived through. Then when there is no author delivered real life consequence it gets much worse for normal readers than uncomfortable - the emotional is anger not sensual - hence the spicy negative comments - these because the saught after entertainment has turned into sick human and marital disrespect. As anyone should see - this concern is not about morality - it is all about respect and if not fair, the balance of consequence

Kudos Applause Appreciation. Hellofva 1st story. More authors should write in this fashion to thier abilities and imaginative capabilities. Thanks and Regards

I loved the way it happened and where it happened. Away from home in a beautiful resort. It made it very erotic and was a great story about how to please everyone involved without remorse. I have had my wife in this same situation but never found the right guy to complete the moment but now we can look at it again and hopefully complete the fantasy the way this was done.

Terrific story, sexy, good environment, realistic, great!

Carry on with episode 2. Simply love yr detailed exhibitionist description. Write more involving exposed wife and younger boys...

continue the adventure PLEASE

What a delicious story....well written too.

The teasing dares heating up the day were very erotic making for a beautiful build up of desire.

Please write again.....

It was pretty good for a first time... I don't know if it was just me, but there seemed to be a lot of confusion with first person, third person switching. Besides that, great job!

What a great build up with the teasing and the dares. By the time they fucked I was ready to cum too. Please continue the story.

Please continue the story

Nice story although it seemed to drag on a bit. Still worth a 5 because I couldn't stop reading it.

I loved the exhibitionist aspect, and the MFM sex at the end. I'm hoping I find that you've written more stories...

The constant switching from 1st person to third person is VERY annoying. Is it "he" or "I"? Pick one and stay with it

My wife and I enjoyed reading about the public exhibition. How fun. We are nudists and have been to many resorts. Never been filmed but that is on our fantasy list. Great story.

Two cocks in one pussy, done that, it can't be beat.