All Comments on 'Ouija'

The slow, frightening and inexorable decline is very well crafted. Enough to give one the shivers.

Good luck.

I loved the reality of the characters. And the usage of such splendid vocabulary and forshadowing. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I enjoyed that, it's certainly a great incentive NOT to play with Ouija boards! - thanks for the read :)

This writer has taken the thriller in a whole new direction. Marvelous dialogue and imagery--well worth reading.

Very chilling story, Luvpsy. Good luck to you.

I would consider placing this story in the non-erotic category. Nice treatment of unusual theme, good luck to you!!

I never liked Ouija boards ... now I know why. Great story,luvpsy. The pace is just right and the ending couldn't have been better.

This one grabs you and doesn't let go! I thought: Oujia board? Come on... what hasn't been done... but then I started reading and couldn't stop! Great job, good luck in the contest.

by this story (grin). Great take on the ouija board's horrific possibilities. They are creepy, though. Good luck in the contest.

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I really did like this story, so much that I think there could have been alot more to it. But I must admit it doesn't belong on this website, you should post it up on deviantART or something.

No bbc?

You are a talented writer. Great story.

Wow, great story! I especially like how you kept it unclear what ever happened whenever Stephanie was in control, though the context doesn't really allow for it to be too horrific.