All Comments on 'One Step from Heaven'

Fantastic fantasy - chapter two eagerly awaited. Silverstag

Great story and great imagination. However, on page 2, last para, editor mispelled "waist" (Used "waste").

When will next episode appear?

Enthralling, very well written. Hope to see more.

It's fantastic and very well written, but where is the rest of it?! I can't wait to read to the ending!

Can't wait to see the next installment. Good build up of characters and plot. Keep going with this story.

I can't wait to read the further adventures.Excellent storyline.A must read for any cfnm lover !!!!

This is with out question one of the best CFNM stories I have ever read. "One Step From Heaven" represents CFNM at it's best. A fantastic begining to what could be a most enjoyable series of stories. Please don't end it to quickly.

I love the story. It's a great beginning for what is hopefully a series. It's a great plot device.

this is the first time i have left feedback your story was that good thank you

I it ended to soon. What happen in the interview?

Occasionally, it fact far too seldom, a story is submitted that is actually erotic. Not some masturbation fantasy that ends predictably but an erotic story in the truest sense. CFNM is my current favorite plot device and this story lays the groundwork for many more chapters. Keep the installments coming, you'll have a loyal fan base.

this isn't even passable as fiction.

This is a great start to a story. I sure hope there is more to come!

We'll see