All Comments on 'One Kiss'

This one was - okay hon - but you're capable of better. I do agree, the typos and punctuation need improvement. The story should have been longer and a touch more romance could have been added, but like I said, I know you are capable of good stuff.

I found it pleasing because it reminded me of the first time I had sex with someone because I wanted to.

Thanks for bringing back a sweet memory.

*huggles*