by moonlight elf
I liked the story and thought that it was written with true feelings. Do not let negative opinions like the last commentor. Ruin your enjoyment of writting.
I thought it was a good story. Perhaps a little thin on the backgrounds of the two lovers but all in all a good story.
A sweet romantic story in the spirit of Valentine's Day.
Good luck.
So this is where you get off to when you're not sitting on the couch sharing a bowl of popcorn with me! Nice work Moonlight. Really enjoyed the romance, and I'm not even a romantic! Thanks for sharing it!