All Comments on 'Not a Home'

Touching. Beautiful. Romantic. Caring. Literotica memebers are still finding this story and your talent. Like me and the other commenters, are pleased and warmly touched by both. Hope all is well with you and that you post new material once again. Trace

Well the first story that made me cry !! So well written! I love itttt!! Can’t wait to read your others!

Second read and I still feel the emotion deep in my heart. Wish there was more to indulge in this beautiful tale.

What an amazing story. I cried a couple times. Definitely one of my favorite stories i've ever read, anywhere. I dont know what to say. Its so good. Very emotional but also very realistic. I love it.

It gets better every time I read it....about 4 dozen times already. I'm a sucker for a good love story.

I always come back to this story, because it has touched me so deeply. Hope to see more of yours here.

This is such a wholesome story I LOVE IT!!! <3

It is fantastic story and brilliantly written and a very moving story and how two women found each other and the kids are very happy at having there own room and hope there is more going to be written about this family as I have read this many times and enjoy it everytime and find something different in the story thank you write soon please.

Lovely! I’m glad I found this gem again. Such a sweet uncomplicated story. The fact that it’s the ‘straight’ woman who initiates the lovemaking is a nice turn from the norm. Nicely done! Thank you.

wow just wow!

Such heartfelt comments for this story.

I think I'll just leave it at that.

Wow, this story is beautiful. Thank you :)

A wonderful story, and so nice to return to.

I’m not normally a fan of the FP narration style, but it’s done really well here, the only thing I’d add is why an apparently straight girl falls for the gay protagonist without a word of explanation, I know this has been pared down to a very concise version, but Vicky’s side of things is conspicuous by its absence.

5⭐️

I LOVE THIS STORY <3

I always enjoy coming back to read this story.

A lovely, if short story!

Thank you

tear jerker for sure. keep them coming!!!

That was very sweet. I have two friends who have kids with Downs, and I have seen that with caring support they can live rich lives. It was a nice element, as Vicky had suffered so much from misinformed attitudes. Beth initially brought her pure compassion to the struggling single mother and her kids. Later she realized that being with her new friends/family was so much more enriching than bar hopping for ... who knows what/who. Keep up the good work.

WONDERFUL 🙂. Wright another one like this.

Just lovely !