All Comments on 'Northern Lights'

I admire the very detailed sex scenes! You are developing as a writer quite nicely with each successive story!

A beautiful story. I liked the way you worked the seasonal atmosphere into the story, without detracting from the SEX!

Most stories of men and women together, dont do much for me. but your story was awesome it enlightened me to explore more into my feelings , thank you for writing it. Also feel free to check out any of my poems i have on this site as well. Again very good.

I do a bit of writing myself and was envious of how well the sex was done.

I'm waiting for snow now!Great story!

Angel, I loved this. Gentle, loving and sexy as hell. Well done.

As I was reading - I could see each of your faces smiling at each other and I saw your breasts rubbing against each other as you "made love." Very erotic - almost made me cum.

A lovely sweet story for Christmas...hope you found what you wanted in the snow!

A beautifully spun Christmas tale. Erotic and loving, well worth the read. More, please!

Reminds me of some time I spent in the snow with my love.

I love a story with feeling & passion - I want to know what they did for new year!

Loved this. So pretty and romantic and erotic. :)

...i miss my partner with your story..heartwarming..

A tender sweet story loved the Christmas images. something about two women making love that is impossible to resist.

Such a lovely story. Meeting that special person out of the blue like that. Serendipity. I met my girlfriend when we were involved in a car wreck and something just clicked between us from the get go. That was two years ago. Love is a beautiful thing.

Mummy's dirty angel this story is brilliantly written and enjoyed reading it hope you will write more about these two ladies and will they become lovers and girlfriends and more I hope it will not be long before we read the next story please you are a brilliant writer thank you. xxx

I was so touched that Alex wanted Chrissy to make love to her. It wasn't just a fling for fun; it felt real. It was warm, tender, loving. I hope that I find that some day. The woman I fell in love with died in a car accident just over a month ago, so I am still grieving.

I had read this before, and I loved it just as much as the first time. I will probably read it again sometime; I enjoy it so much!