All Comments on 'Nina's Ride'

I only gave you a high score because I love the BMW R75 (I have the R100S) and you wore a helmet. I can take or leave the story. TomJ

waiting for the other shoe to fall all the way through.

"Twenty years ago, a few months before you were born . ."

Surely she was going to turn out to be his daughter..

and there is a 19 and-a-bit year age difference between them, This Tale Screams out for a DNA test.

and this fellow can pick out a state police car , in the dark, through trees 60feet away -(twice). Adds a frisson of excitement to the narrative, but was over-played, as was the drugs angle.

and Picnic Tables have Splinters, don't forget, and get dewy in the evenings. Do I sense a Lack of Research?

Great tale though.

Cheers,

Kilroy