All Comments on 'Night Picnic'

Here I was hopeing that ahh... now this is gonna get even better - comon get the ranger to jump her now... and then a couple more people!! And some one to get good ole Bobby good for being such a dick!

Bobby truly put her in harms way, he's a dangerous moron and should be killed.

bound and gaged and found by a ranger. please continue on with the plot and let more people in on the action. this story was hot and would be hotter with the ranger taking her.

discredited your work - and strangly its not in your bio so why here? The crudeness didn't help either - he's an asshole without merit so what does that make her. In your youth is crass crudeness erotic?

Surely you have more class than this - don't you?

This hits a wrong note with me.....Her boyfriend left her to be maul by a bear, while being tied up.....If I was the girl in this story, I would tied him up and place him in the middle of some HUGE snakes

But PLEASE add the ranger bit, don't make seem like a pervert but make seem like girl gives him a reward from saving him from the bear it makes it more interesting. I like stiff rangers or cold ones at first but sort sounds like cold beer doesn't it.

trying understand why that guy didn't get picnic somewhere at area that wasn't infested with bears...but leave his girlfriend for dessert for bear. But if they make this for movie I give A+ rating for it it has humor all in it. Seems the ranger came along after or was he watching the whole scene? he must had boner among those bushes...watching that bear jeez?