by Kinkykiff
The use of a spell checker like Office word will go a long way in your writing.
I'm not Hemingway myself, so I'm not speaking as a snob. Just work on your stories for awhile before submitting them. Rewriting is a part of it. Keep at it though.
Hey dude,
just read the story.
The story idea was great! Really enjoyed it, but I think you shold put some extra effort on spelling, grammar and getting the text to flow a bit better...
when will the next part come?
;-)
mr_fred