All Comments on 'Nick's Gift'

but I thought the ending was something of a let down. I would have continued it to another sex scene, possibly involving Sylvia.

I was unsure if Nick and Freda were living together or not. It sounded like it but you didn't mention it.

Nice job of capturing her feelings. She didn't turn into 'SuperSlut' at the drop of a hat, she had to be seduced. Nice touch.

Very good story BT.. enjoyed it. Good luck!

Great tension building, good characterization. I had a feeling that was why his name was Nick.. .<grin> Good job, good luck!

... in the contest. I enjoyed reading the story.

Always, E

ha ha ha ho ho ho I'd shoot 'em if they did that to me hehehe...great erotic story ..<grin> as long as it was some one else <laughing> nice suprise ...Nick's Gift~ (^5) excellent and very well written.

Merry Christmas and Good Luck (~_~)

as are all your stories! I feel privileged to read them!

It explains why they didn't live together. Well written. Good luck with the contest.

Jenny

Once again your words painted a beautiful canvas!

Really enjoy your stories............never stop writing and being you! The glenboy2 will always be ready to read and experience more with you!

Happy holidays and good luck in the contest! ~Imp

A well-crafted read, BT. In other words, just what I've come to expect. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

Somehow your story sheds light on the "typical" buffet style Christmas party in the back room of a restaurant beging rather borish. Perhaps I will suggest your "style" of Christmas party to the HR department for future reference. I am quite sure it would improve attendance. Very erotic, sensual and exciting. Good luck in the contest.

Respectfully,

~wind

LOVED IT! Great job BT. Your words really brought me into the tale. Naughty Saint Nick...

BRAVA.

A very enjoyable read, BT.

Best of luck in the contest!

To read your work BT.

and always a pleasure to read your work. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

as usual BT! it's always a treat to read something you've written.

Abs.

BT, your story made me squirm and now I really need a tissue. Best of luck!

It's always a pleasure reading one of your works...

You did a great job yet again!!

~Honey

It was hot, and I got a nice chuckle at the end. Sex/erotica is good when it's fun.

I liked the touch of humour running through the story.

Alex

Nice, erotic, fun romp. Great read, BT.

too short, though. Must be an elf thing. ;-)