All Comments on 'Naked Warriors'

This is a nonconsent story. Nothing more. Please put it in the appropriate category next time so people who do not read that sort of stuff do not waste their time.

Very interesting concept for a combination of "pleasures"; A little bondage, some spanking, kidnapping, rape, etc.; I Liked it! Please end the story though.

Geez, ignore the idiot that made that nonconsent comment. This story was beautifully written and very imaginative. Sure, it has a touch of nonconsent but the woman most definitely wanted everything that happened to her.

Well-written and titillating. Please continue....!

I liked the details of the leather bindings sticking to her wrists as if held with an unseen adhesive. Alien abduction fantasies have been of interest to me for 30 years, and this one reads very well. As far as the non-consent comment: persons going into these types of "exploration" situations should be briefed and fully aware that "anything" could happen, and by going on the mission do so at their own risk (and are fully consenting). If the mission briefing didn't forsee the possibility of capture and torture, or worse, shame on them! The only possible protection would be an unremovable, titanium alloy chastity belt or something, and that just doesn't seem to get written. Anyway, primative aliens might have a hard time working around it, but advanced ones should simply be able to make it dematerialize. The same is true in real life; soldiers (men and women) simply cannot be protected from sexual torture, so we might as well get used to the idea.

great job! COntinue the story!

That was a wonderfully intriguing and arousing story, i cant wait for it to continue!

Wonderful! But this can't be the end of this story?!?

I loved this story for its focus on the woman's pleasure and pain, her submission and the descriptions of the subjugation. Ok, she was non-consenting at one level, but it was spoils of alien war not the horror of the reality if it was on terra firma. I'm adult enough to know fantasy from reality. One thing I was expecting was for the so-called primitive to then speak and be found to be highly intelligent with a sense of inventiveness about sex and BDSM that came from that intellect. The devices suggested that was a possibility. Now where can I have made that anal device that links the neck with the rectum....mmmmm!

A wonderful fantasy. Thanks for taking the time to write it and please continue if there is more!!!

What will happen next? More, please! You're a great writer.

Oh come on! What happens next? Don't leave me hanging!

I do not know if you intend to make this a long story or leave it as it is but if you do leave it as is you'll have diassapointed fans. I hope you do write more of this story because I would love to know the meaning behind some things that the 'Naked Warriors' did.

don't end it like this there must be more

please write more

Yu got my juices flowwing ,My cunt is dripping!!! I hope you are going to do more !!!!!!!!!JOAN @ The JERSEY SHORE

Very Hot! Please, I'm begging... write more don't leave us hanging!!!

I don't want to be here. I know love hurts, but I'm not a masochist, and I would like being that lady. Still, the idea of being claimed by a scary naked man seems cool.

I liked it

Some people just have nothing better to do then complain

Please write more!!!!!! This story was soooo good

A female protagonist who is intelligent, motivated, focused and accomplished, discovers that which she has supressed for her entire life can provide almost unendurable pleasure. However, it's only her scenario that finally provides the permission to make the discovery.

Ah, that stubborn resistance to sexual pleasure!

Perhaps her ultimate scientific discovery will be a personal one --- that smart and driven women need not forgo the pure lust and enjoyment of total surrender to their sexual fantasies.

If our heroine is ever rescued (if she even wants to be!), maybe her life as a member of a planetary exploration team will somehow change. Maybe she will find ways in her scientist-life to create the scenarios she has discovered rock her own newly discovered inner world.

Maybe, just maybe, she will lay claim to the enjoyment and sexual thrills she has denied herself for so long . . .

Please write more soon. I absolutely loved it!

Damn you cant write something like that and leave us hanging. This tale is begging for a continuation.