All Comments on 'Naked at College 01 Pt. 01'

Liked the story very much. There was an extra 'n' around when "the dam burst" but I guess most people won't notice that in the excitement of the tale. Wouldn't mind joining that College though!!!

This is one of the sexiest stories I've read in some time. I like the characters of Chrissie, Beth and Michael and can't wait to see what happens in the second part. Long story but holds the reader's interest quite well. Enjoyable Read!

The story is completely preposterous, of course, and what's even more preposterous is that it works -- as do your other stories, notably "The Lesson" series.

More!

This is awesome, and true to the spirit of The Program, it helped me get over my own inhibitions. Like Chrissie, I thought the idea of a penis ejaculating was disgusting, but now it's rather hot.

I am overwhelmed. I don't know how I missed this story before but it is the very best story i have read in the NIS universe. I felt closer to the two protagonists than any others-and, they were used better in the classes, esp the nursing class. I can hardly wait for part 2.

Does this fantasy college hire staff using the reverse IQ measurement? That must be the case, because all the instructors in this farce were prime examples of walking, 'brain-dead', Donna Reed clones. The Art teacher was absolutely ludicrous and the Nursing Instructor was even worse. The only character portrayed in this tale that had even a passing resemblance to reality, was the Security Guard assigned to the protagonists. I can't wait to see what insane slapstick you will pull off for the other six days these kids are in 'The Program'.

Very detailed, well written, fantasy work. I really sympathize with the main characters. Even though it is long, as you repeatedly have stated, I feel compelled to find out what happens to Chrissie and Michael.

<p>What a totally insane, yet delightfully titillating premis!<p>

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, laughing all the way.<p>

I DO hope the others are as engaging and fun...

It was okay to describe him as a smart nerd. However, describing him with a small dick and tiny balls was insulting and kept the story from being sexy.

Really well written and with some natural results while reading.

Most enjoyable and entertaining. You write so well. 5*****

Truly and enjoyable read and wonderful fantasy.

I really, really enjoyed reading this episode --- it is well written and presented and the idea of 2 naked people on campus is very stimulating!!

Please be warned that it includes aspects of submission and humiliation, as well as voyeurism and exhibitionism. Otherwise, enjoy!!

Otherwise enjoy??????

Apart from the beautiful writing, what else could make it so titillating? Must say I loved it... though not allowed to vote twice. Why? I have enjoyed it twice!

That is truly one of the best.

Very well done, with fresh ideas that are done very well and with lots of humor.

It's also refreshing to have the male protagonist who does not sport a 12 " cock.

One of the best stories I've read.

Thanks

This story is not only tintilating and sexy but also a lot of fun. Thank you

Your writing skills are well honed, I felt as if I was a part/inside the story. I enjoyed every sentence, I can't wait to read more!

This is a wonderful fantasy that, sadly, is far from real life. If I had attended that college, I would have volunteered to be the first participant in The Program. In fact, I might have begged. I have modeled nude for college art classes for 30 years, and it is just standard protocol to put on the robe in class when not on the stand. I wish real life was closer to this story. It was very enjoyable to read.

you have a nice dirty mind, and your descripttion of htings as well as your making things last is a very nice ttouch

Please make more of this.

I could picture everything as I read your story. I will definitely continue as there were parts I was LMAO. Well done.

Well structured descriptive and insightful from both Michael and Chrissy.

Was expecting an examination on Chrissy's labia etc.

Perhaps the afternoon session will cover this.

Absolute Best. Every detail is superbly written with true creativity. I've now read and re-read it many times and I love it even more.

Great writing and tip top for sexual arousal. Thanks !

This is truly great. Just, every scene stretched out, every awkwardness picked up and examined... Loved the art teacher posing and edging him all period long, loved the explosive finale!