All Comments on 'My Older Man'

I love the story line, it is very effective in the fansty, thank you

Love this story!

The story is just a manifestation of what I would like to do with my cock-teaser of a niece.

I really enjoyed it!

u described her feelings really well. it reminds me of wen i met my daddy

It was just getting good when you ended it. What the fuck was that?

...but we all miss you on the Lit forums. Where you at, girl?

Loved it Blue, Daddy's can be gentle as a Lamb, but teased, we turn like a Tiger or Lion :D

OH WOW that was soooo HOT! i want a daddy like that i NEED a daddy like that, please write more this was excellent!

I used to have a daddy like that but unfortunately we couldn't get along out of bed. this story brought back plenty of hot memories

Oh my god this has got to be the hottest story I've read in ages!! I soaked my panties after just the first few paragraphs! The dirty talk gets me every time and you nailed it perfectly! God I want a Daddy like Mark! MMMMMMM please post more ASAP!!!

didn't realize it was your first effort...makes it even better than i first said...if i could give you more then 100 i would!!!

nice and graphic! colorful and teasing. I felt as if I was there! Great job!

Wow - this made me so hot. He needs to use her more and more, and keep up the nasty talk!

really delicious. bummer you got to anal so soon, a bit more other stuff would be awesome.