by Boxlicker101
Apart from the fact that I hated the idea of Mrs. Claus doing the dirty on poor ole Santa, the story was a positive cornocupia of sexual athleticism and feats of lasciviousness that couldn't help but thrill the reader.
Top marks!
As I read your story, I couldn't help but picture the scene in my mind and that made it even more enjoyable. Well done!
Box, your story rocks. LOL
I would love to be an elf too.
Can I, can I, can I, please?
In addition you have gathered some terribly funny comments.
U r gr8t at riting hot storis. LOL
Good luck.
Black Tulip
May your stroke crown never tarnish ; )
Best of luck in the contest!
Box, I think my Xmas Xcess story is still a contender, but you may have just staked a strong claim for most mindless sex in one contest entry. :)
A hot, fun read. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
I just wish I was an elf :) Very well-written and enjoyable.
Sent you sum feedback by email 2.
Happy Holidays :)
Ali
be an elf...Great work Box. Good luck in the contest.
The best part was AIDS and STD's are unknown to elves.;)
An irreverant shot through a portal of playfully cuckolding the Man who commands great respect from most even into maturity. But not all it seems. Obviously there was no one else to rite under? Puzzling eh??? Contest?
Everyone always talks about Santa but never do you hear about Mrs. Claus. This is a great read about Santa's once a year business trip. And while the cat is gone ...... Lets just say, the mice really live it up and down and up and down ....
This was one wild ride! The CPS comment cracked me up. Great job, good luck! :)
hey u fucking ass this piece of writinf is a piece of shit y dont u go and let santa clause go fuck u and suckur little dick that cant even satisfy a baby ,people might even think ur a woman with a tight pussy .fucking no god slut face cock sucking ass like u .
I mean, he has to be jolly from something, doesn't he? What better way than to join his wife and the elves the next morning.
Jesus, Box, that was hot as hell! My panties are soaked and it's all your fault (not a complaint)! Very hot, wet and horny piece. Good luck!
I had to wait another year to get my train set when I was a kid . . Damn horny elves. A good one Boxlicker. Thank You. Ronnie W.
the same way again! How dare you tarnish her "pure as the driven snow image!" Great sex writing as always, and good luck in the contest.