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kbateover 17 years agoNice first effort
I think you should keep it up and definitely submit more stories. You have chosen a good editor and penned an interesting story. Good luck in the contest.
EdenNightover 17 years agoLoved it
I loved the story and would love to see where you will be taking it next, if you do.
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