All Comments on 'Mary Lewis Saw It First'

Eerie tale of seeing a little girl in a swing; only to find she was deceased months before that. Other supernatural goings on assist this fascinating plot. Wonderful Story!

Sorry, but this story is poor. The basic premise could have been explored so much better, a bit of suspense would have contributed so much, and last but not least, decent spelling and grammar would have helped!

Excellent story, it is just so heartbreaking that the parents could be so uncaring for their children

The idea is novel, the actual execution less satisfactory. This author tends to tell stories in the manner of a weather report. The intense feelings that must be present here were just hinted at in a cool manner. As a result, i was left emotionally cold by what could have been a very moving tale.