All Comments on 'Mary Christmas'

loved it...a 10++++...i have to say when you mentioned this was a bit different, you had that right. This is the BEST christmas present a lil slut girl could have. Please santa put me at the top of your list will ya? hehe...excellent work, windwriter...i'm looking forward to hearing more from you thru out the rest of this year and next...excellent. i am just wondering what my Master will have on his Christmas list? hmmmmm..maybe Santa will tell me. heh

knew Santa would be an ass man...that is hysterical. I love the imagination, the idea and the down right irreverant attitude. Fantastic job. Good luck in the contest.

Great story... good luck with the contest.

... with the contest and happy holidays.

Always, E

It is a novel take on the Santa Claus theme and well written. However, I must confess the actual content leaves me cold. Good luck in the contest.

An excellent read superbly told. The wonderful sense of humor throughout the story doesn't hurt either. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Thanks for sharing this naughty little gem

& very best of luck to you in the contest!

...for all your comments on this story. Your remarks are what inspires writers to know if they are on the right track. I had fun writing this story. Sometimes we need to smile, laugh and enjoy life, it's good for the soul. Wishing all of you have a great holiday!

Sincerely,

windwriter

Nice start, though such tricks in the last line always leave me cold. Liked the anal sex theme though.

Merry (Mary) Christmas. To all.