All Comments on 'Mafia Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I hope this is not the end.

This was great! Another chapter where the girls' rescue attempt of Amy is botched and they all become slaves of Donna and Ava, perhaps?

verbicideverbicidealmost 13 years ago
like to see the follow up

I'd like to see the follow up story. Given my personal proclivities, I'd prefer to see the rest of the thugs of the Gionese family slain...painfully and Donna sent to a women's prison where the "nice" ladies could take care of her. Face it, mafioso and their ilk are parasites and vermin and there should only be one fate left for them. Hmmm...maybe my version would have to be posted in the non-erotic area.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WTF??

this whole story is just so much BS. you haven't a clue about the mafia culture. stick with stroke stories because this is so sophomoric....what a waste of space.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I like this story.

Perhaps organized crime does not happen this way, but it should! (quote director ford)

Can you please finish?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Fanciful scenario. The sex may have been good [if I took the time to read it] but the scenario turned me off

verbicideverbicideover 6 years ago
Too bad

I would've liked a part 2 to this. To have some good hot sex along with the death of all the mafiosi would've been sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Over the Top

Mafia world does not even come close to using dtrs.in that way no matter what. The cop would have been dead very shortly after his killing of the wife.Fantasy is not like this bulls..t

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